December 28, 2003 Subject:
How about a longer film, The Thief 3, maybe?
We see great possibilities in the franchise you`ve got there with
"The Thief" and "The Thief 2"!
You are using computer software with the texts in this clip. We think you could pay even more attention to editing your films. It seems to us that, with a programme for editing, you would be able to trim some of the frames, which went past way too fast especially near the end of the film. Maybe the framerate was too big...
-nice use of subtitling
-the Thief got hurt!
-the music in this film created a sense of suspense, which was, however, not put into full use in the animation. It feels a bit "rushed".
-video quality should be better
-some voice acting could really help
-when the guy goes out he comes back way too soon
-this film has a very abrupt ending!
For The Thief number 3, or some other next project, you might like to watch other Brickfilms and try to find some tips for camera angles etc.